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04 junho 2011

Review: Enclave (Ann Aguirre)

Publisher: Feiwel & Friends (2011)
Format: Hardcover | 259 pages
Genre(s): Young Adult, Science-Fiction
Description (Goodreads): "In Deuce’s world, people earn the right to a name only if they survive their first fifteen years. By that point, each unnamed ‘brat’ has trained into one of three groups–Breeders, Builders, or Hunters, identifiable by the number of scars they bear on their arms. Deuce has wanted to be a Huntress for as long as she can remember.

As a Huntress, her purpose is clear—to brave the dangerous tunnels outside the enclave and bring back meat to feed the group while evading ferocious monsters known as Freaks. She’s worked toward this goal her whole life, and nothing’s going to stop her, not even a beautiful, brooding Hunter named Fade. When the mysterious boy becomes her partner, Deuce’s troubles are just beginning.

Down below, deviation from the rules is punished swiftly and harshly, and Fade doesn’t like following orders. At first she thinks he’s crazy, but as death stalks their sanctuary, and it becomes clear the elders don’t always know best, Deuce wonders if Fade might be telling the truth. Her partner confuses her; she’s never known a boy like him before, as prone to touching her gently as using his knives with feral grace.

As Deuce’s perception shifts, so does the balance in the constant battle for survival. The mindless Freaks, once considered a threat only due to their sheer numbers, show signs of cunning and strategy… but the elders refuse to heed any warnings. Despite imminent disaster, the enclave puts their faith in strictures and sacrifice instead. No matter how she tries, Deuce cannot stem the dark tide that carries her far from the only world she’s ever known.
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Warning: Contains Spoilers!
Like many other authors of speculative fiction, Ann Aguirre also decided to jump onto the "YA Dystopian/Apocaliptic fiction" hot train. With two adult series already out, Aguirre can hardly be considered a newbie in the genre, even if it's her first time writing for younger audiences. Unfortunately, after finishing "Enclave" all I could think of was that this book needed so much work it did indeed seem to have been written by a debut author.

Deuce lives underground in what's left of the subway tunnels. Her community (or "enclave") survives by dividing people into three categories according to the "job" they're going to have for the rest of their lives (job chosen at the tender age of 15). Some are Breeders (tasked with procreating and caring for the "brats"); some are Builders and spend their lives checking and improving the integrity of tunnels and fabricating tools to cover the necessities of the Enclave; and the rest are Hunters, the warriors that protect the community and travel the dark tunnels looking for food. The biggest threat to the Enclave are the "Freaks", humanoid flesh-eating monsters that constantly try to attack the underground human communities. Life is hard and people die young. This is the reality of life in the Enclave.

Rings a bell? Yep, it did remind me of something as well. Earlier this year I've read a book with a very similar plot line; it was Metro 2033 by Dmitry Glukhovsky. But while Glukhovsky's carefully crafted underground world made the reading of his book interesting, "Enclave" left me cold, because the world-building wasn't nearly as good. And the story was dangerously similar.

Our heroine, Deuce, a Hunter has to assess a threat by journeying to the next underground community (just like in Metro 2033); at some point in the narrative, through an unrealistic turn of events Deuce and her mysterious partner Fade are exiled and have to go to the surface.
This is where it starts being less "Metro 2033" and more "Forest of Hands and Teeth". As they are also searching for a 'mythical' place that no-one else believes in.

So, story-wise, "Enclave" has very little to recommend it. It's been done and done better. I must admit I was impressed by certain aspects like the descriptions of the crumbling human civilization (yes, I've seen that documentary too... the one that showed how long it would take for our cities to decay if we disappeared), but other than that there is little to recommend in this book. The characters were flat and the romance unrealistic, the story was not properly developed (besides the aforementioned lack of originality) and there was one thing missing that really annoyed me (as it did in Metro 2033): Aguirre didn't explain how it happened. Why did our civilization fall. Maybe it comes in later books, though, since this is part of a series.

On the plus side, I found this book a lot easier to read than her adult ones. The writing was simpler (I guess it was a little convoluted in her other books) and the characters were likable (albeit flat and stereotypical). It was also interesting to see how much knowledge had been lost (Deuce didn't know the meaning of certain words or the use of certain objects).

Overall, this Young Adult Dystopian doesn't stand out from other works in the genre. If you are a fan of the genre though, you may want to give it a try as it is an easy and quick read, but don't expect much in the way of originality or character development.

31 janeiro 2011

Review: Blue Diablo

Publisher: Roc (2009)
Format:  Mass Market Paperback | 316 pages
Genre(s): Urban Fantasy
Description: "Other women change their hair color on a whim or to impress a new boyfriend; Corinne Solomon dyes hers because she's running scared. She's a handler, a paranormal who can touch something and almost instantly know its history and, if she's lucky (or unlucky) its future, too. Now hiding out in Mexico, she wants to keep a low profile, but when people come begging for her help, she can't refuse, although she knows that she should know better ."
I don't know if it's the author's writing style (it must be, at least partially, as I had some trouble getting through Grimspace as well) but this one was hard to read through. The plot was very simple and straightforward, not that interesting; maybe not enough for a full novel, so the author fills pages and pages with Corine (the main - sort-of - character) contemplating her past relationship with Chance, her ex-boyfriend who appears on her doorstep at the beginning asking for her help to find his missing mother. Angsty thoughts and interactions between these two characters follow, sprinkled throughout the book, making it... well, boring.

The kidnapping is pushed to second plan, not given as much spotlight as the relationship talk. Ok, so it's normal to wonder what could have been but does Corine really need to do it every other chapter? Does she has to think about how she wants to jump Chance's bones and then angst because she can't that frequently? Do they have to have embarrassing and pointless conversations about how they misinterpreted each other in the past every other page? A little of all this might be called character development, but this much just reeks of filler.

Of course with this much focus of the status of the characters' relationship the plot wasn't properly explored and the resolution felt... flat. There was little foreshadowing (about who the evil warlock was, etc), the characters did little to no investigative work and most of the time they just stood around in a house. The pacing was, therefore, slow and again... boring.

World building was pretty bad as well. Okay, so there is a hidden world of practitioners but what exactly is a handler? How did Corine come by her gift (the explanation given is murky at best)? If Jesse is her mentor, why didn't he explain more about that world? The author would have gained more in setting the world in which the characters move than focusing on Corine and her ex (who does seem like he'll be present in the next book, so I'm dreading that read - I have already bought it).

Honestly, I didn't like this one much. It was boring and underdeveloped in all the ways that mattered. I know Aguirre can do better, as I've read the first in her other series, "Grimspace" and enjoyed it a lot more.